Almost EternalApril Moss has always lived in her famous mother shadow. Will she find the light she is looking for or will just end up somewhere darker?This is a plot-based story (honestly, there is a plot) about three teenaged girls on a disastrous journey to vampiric madness.Genre: tragicomedy seems to be the general consensus.Important to note: this story is a riot but it does get deep at times. Contains an unhealthy dose of dark humour.Story summaries are now available for Book One, Book Two and Book Three on the story index.Latest ChaptersChapter 4.22 - Flirt With DeathChapter 4.21 - DisruptionChapter 4.20 - The chicken is alive!Join our Simmers community at Sim Creatives a place for anyone who creates for, or is inspired by, the Sims.

Yay, I'm glad you made a thread - makes it much easier to follow updates for me :) I'm up to date for now but have bookmarked this, can't wait to see where you take Sandy and April!

Oooh, I like this. Very strong prologue. Your writing is great - you had my attention from the very first line. Bookmarked! :smiley:

Oh I see familiar faces. :# *waves at everyone*I'm only at the prologue but woah I'm loving the cast and story already (Including Sandy. She gives me Mother Gothel vibes! I'm definitely following. Such great writing too! A little busy this week but when I have a moment I'll be binge reading for sure.

Wow, I'm really quite floored by the feedback so far, thank you for taking the time to comment. This is my first attempt at writing so I was totally prepared to be humiliated and now I don't know how to react, haha.

Is this your first sim story, or your first story in general? If it's the latter, that's really really impressive! Don't worry, there's no humiliation on these forums (that I know of, at least). Only reader's comments and constructive criticism for those that want it. Also, I'm going to call you Snuffy, because it sounds adorable. :#

Almost Eternal - updated 11th August

ThePlumbobBlog
5 years ago
Yay, I'm glad you made a thread - makes it much easier to follow updates for me :) I'm up to date for now but have bookmarked this, can't wait to see where you take Sandy and April!
MikageYimiki
5 years ago
Oooh, I like this. Very strong prologue. Your writing is great - you had my attention from the very first line. Bookmarked! :smiley:
loveceres
5 years ago
Oh I see familiar faces. :# *waves at everyone*

I'm only at the prologue but woah I'm loving the cast and story already (Including Sandy. She gives me Mother Gothel vibes! I'm definitely following. Such great writing too! A little busy this week but when I have a moment I'll be binge reading for sure.
SnuffyBucket
Seasoned Novice
5 years ago
Wow, I'm really quite floored by the feedback so far, thank you for taking the time to comment. This is my first attempt at writing so I was totally prepared to be humiliated and now I don't know how to react, haha.
MikageYimiki
5 years ago
Is this your first sim story, or your first story in general? If it's the latter, that's really really impressive! Don't worry, there's no humiliation on these forums (that I know of, at least). Only reader's comments and constructive criticism for those that want it.
Also, I'm going to call you Snuffy, because it sounds adorable. :#
ThePlumbobBlog
5 years ago
Sounds like you've been sitting on some good stories then, if they haven't made it out of your head ? Either way, don't worry, amazing start, and welcome to the community!
amp107
5 years ago
I'm so happy I stumbled upon your thread! I've only read the prologue so far, but can't wait to read the rest when I have time. Great writing!
loveceres
5 years ago
Ah geez chapter 2 had me rolling! I just have to express it here :D I loved that.

Spoiler
You go April, girlfriend! Looks like for all of Sandy's nastiness, she's given you heaps of equally scathing comebacks to work with there.

Kay I'm composed now. Cheers.
SnuffyBucket
Seasoned Novice
5 years ago
Chapters 5 & 6 are now live.
From now on I'll be endeavouring to post new chapters each Monday and Friday. And maybe Wednesday, depending on how much of a cliffhanger I've left you on... o:)
ThePlumbobBlog
5 years ago
Chapters 5 & 6

Spoiler
Ah, I didn't expect for him to turn her. Weirly when they found her unconscious I didn't even think he drank from her, I figured he used some kind of vampirical powers to render her unconscious so that she's stop bugging him and to avoid being exposed - but I guess he wasn't that worried about being discrete in the end, lol! I liked the way you depicted the transition, with the food tasting like ash.

I suppose you could say April's investigation into vampires has been pretty successful, haha, even though she ended up getting more than she bargained for. Definitely curious what she will do with her newfound powers, and if Caleb will return to show her the ways of her new life (unlife?), or if he'll leave her to figure it out on her own.

I knew Sandy would take a liking to Caleb haha. I am weirdly hoping that she will manage to find a new surgeon ? A part of me just can't help but root for her!