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"SnowBnuuy;c-17861532" wrote:
I have returned and have finally caught up!
5: Ooh, I like the rival bloodline reveal. Alaric Blackfyre looks pretty terrifying with those stern expressions. Geez, what a way to treat your own students. This guy is awful.SpoilerYes, he is awful for sure. He can be intimidating. And the terrifying part is what I'm going for when it comes to his character.
6: On top of everything Meredith is also a tattletale ❤️❤️❤️❤️ and I'm not surprised. Those brownies look good!SpoilerThe brownies look good, for sure. Meredith is such a snitch.
7: Ooh boy, the slippery slope of Untamed magic...Yikes, Zelda, comparing traumas like that? Braeden has as much of a right to feel like trash as she does...I feel kinda bad for Braeden now, being invalidated on the spot about something like that.SpoilerI agree that it's unnecessary to compare traumas like that.
8: Magic overcharge is such a horrible thing to experience in my mind. Woah, steady, Zelda! What if you poison her? Or is that the plan? Reboot Zelda is arguably even darker than Ver.1 Zelda .O. Even Braeden's face, he's like 'really?' The first time I've seen Zelda smile for a while and it's because of a desire for revenge. Oh god, it looks like she may have fuelled a long chain of revenges on the other...I can't imagine being a fish to be much fun. The joys of Morphiate huh?SpoilerYes, she is darker. She might get in too deep, but who knows?
9: I like your portrayal of Morgyn a lot. 'when you give the bully what they want, they hit back harder' Braeden spitting out the facts! Listen up Zelda! It's good Zelda apologised to Braeden for what she said but IDK if it's genuine yet. The fact that there was a fourth sage and a ancient tome is cool. Alaric is downright awful, ugh. I hope he gets his comeuppance.SpoilerI portrayed Morgyn the way they would behave. I've seen other writers portray them in a similar fashion, so there's that.
10: So it seems Zelda's apology and desire to change might have some genuineness to it. The scene with them both beside the fire is sweet. I think giving Braeden a chance will do them both good.SpoilerThe scene with them by the fire is sweet for sure.
11: Braeden kicking Mark was honestly the great. Who hasn't wanted to boot an abuser square in the jaw? I'm glad Zelda tried to stand her ground with Mark, though.SpoilerI know, right? Gotta give credit to Zelda for trying to stand her ground, even though Mark had been cruel to her in the past.
12: That shot of the building obscured by the trees is kinda eerie. That altar scene is disturbing X_X Let's see what happens with that girl.SpoilerI agree with you on the creepy shots.
13: Geez, Alaric, attacking students? Not even just that, attacking teenagers? Somebody had better catch this guy doing this. I wonder if his behaviour has been reported, but then sort of ignored because they didn't believe it or something?SpoilerThe reason they haven't looked into his behavior is because he tends to wipe people's memories. I see it as manipulation.
14: The girls that complain about 'missing the chance' to date the 'hottest guy in the academy' don't see Braeden for who he is, though, they're all about what they see in his looks, unlike Zelda who has more of a personal connection with him as a whole person. "There's nothing wrong with needing help." - YES, this! That ending was heartwarming especially the pic of them cuddling up to one another < : )SpoilerYep, the girls were a little shallow when it comes to him. Sometimes people focus too much on looks when having a crush on someone.
