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Improve grammar and spelling

Rovsau
6 posts Member
edited January 12
Flawed grammar and spelling can tarnish the reputation of any franchise. I want this game to grow, and so I offer my constructive criticism. Yes, I am known to be a grammar police officer.

Please, run official announcements by someone who have above average Written English skills, and google when in doubt. It doesn't have to be perfect, just better. Like spelling the game's name correctly, and avoiding redundant phrases.
Happy New Year Tiberium Alliance!
2019-01-02 10:30:10

Original:
Hello Commanders,

we hope everyone has had a few quite holidays. With 2019, we are setting sights on our 8th anniversary with Command & Conquer: Tiberium Alliance. This year we are planning to launch another World Championship soon early this year and another Veteran Challenge after the summer. That and more surprises await us in 2019, and we hope you will join us once more.

Here’s to more armies to command and worlds to conquer – see you on the battlefield!

Improved:
Happy New Year, Commanders!

We hope everyone had a good time during the holidays. With 2019, we are setting sights on the 8th anniversary of Command & Conquer: Tiberium Alliances. This year, we are planning to launch another World Championship (very soon), and another Veteran Challenge after the summer. That, and more surprises, await us in 2019, and we hope you will join us once more.

Here’s to more armies to Command, and worlds to Conquer – see you on the battlefield!

Replies

  • gamerdruid
    2040 posts Moderator
    edited January 13
    As a British native English speaking person, I find many instances of poor spelling and grammar on the internet. However, I can generally understand the message that is being conveyed and recognise that, for many, English is just one of many languages they use. I don’t expect perfection.
    I am not an employee of EA/Envision. The views expressed are my own!
  • The meaning of this sentence is broken
    we hope everyone has had a few quite holidays
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