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jofre_nash
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11 years ago

Criticism needed

This is so creative! I'm super impressed! I love it. The only thing I'm not sure about is the thing in the center. What is it?
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    jofre_nash
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    So after several months... I finally changed it. I reduced the size and gave my park more like an impossible object theme with some benches to admire the sculptures and a playground for the little ones.

    So, again all your criticism is welcomed:



  • the monument threw me off a little. Otherwise its looking great. Agree about the 3d for the drive in, if you can pull it off. Well done!
  • The 3D TV screen can be further improved, by adding a different color of land (gray pavement) in contrast with the surrounding (green grass). The Movie Poster is 2D, so it does not give ppl an impression that it's a 3D TV screen. Suggest u replace it with an object, or better still, an animated object.

    Overall, your design is great. 8)
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    jofre_nash
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    nettangel wrote:

    I love the floating stones and especially the star shapes in the centre of the small hedges.
    I see an almost Mickey Mouse head like you had last year when you added the black hole, which to me was his nose lol.
    Always a pleasure strolling through your town Nash!


    Always a pleasure to read you nett! thanks for the comments!


    lee67628 wrote:
    The 3D TV screen can be further improved, by adding a different color of land (gray pavement) in contrast with the surrounding (green grass). The Movie Poster is 2D, so it does not give ppl an impression that it's a 3D TV screen. Suggest u replace it with an object, or better still, an animated object.

    Overall, your design is great. 8)


    Yea... I ended up scratching out the 3d TV. My current design is the new picture of it. No TV, no sir put a lots, no open air stage, less area and more imposible objects. I also tried it to make it look like a sunken park.