Criticism needed

lisavolpe4 wrote:
This is so creative! I'm super impressed! I love it. The only thing I'm not sure about is the thing in the center. What is it?

Thanks! haha It is supposed to be a monument of some sort, it has some cool 3d illusion.

Looks good :thumbup:

Hi neighbour, I like the 3d illusion in the centre, like the illusion of floating concrete slabs.

The only thing I would try to change is to make the surround of the outdoor cinema into 3d.

1Mastiff wrote:
The only thing I would try to change is to make the surround of the outdoor cinema into 3d.

Hadn't noticed that...Mastiff is spot on - you should try a row of fences going in the opposite direction on the right hand side of that movie screen to complete the look. Though you will then have to add a top row of hedges or cobblestone walls to finish it off.

My only suggestion would be to add the Squidport fences to the back side one of the theatres' benches to give your patrons a backrest - one or the other because it would give you two different styles of the same bench with two different theatres. (just my suggestion)

But overall another solid and beautiful design, brother!

jofre_nash wrote:

lisavolpe4 wrote:
This is so creative! I'm super impressed! I love it. The only thing I'm not sure about is the thing in the center. What is it?

Thanks! haha It is supposed to be a monument of some sort, it has some cool 3d illusion.

Kinda trippy, it looks like floating concrete.

Looks awesome!

I agree with the suggestions above. I would also add a flower cart with some heart balloons next to the cart.

Looks great, jofre!

Hey bud - looks awesome! Kind of like everything you make. I always look forward to seeing the things you come up with.

I wonder how it would look if you lined the perimeter of the pavement with boardwalk fences. It might not look good at all, but I'm often surprised by how much boardwalk fences can enhance the look of transitions.

Hello all, thank you all for your input and ideas. Right now I am working in a remote community with very limited wi fi access (hopefully I can get some items from the new content) and today I finally get to changed the design:



@1mastiff: The cinema came out incomplete in tsto me but looks normal in the game.. weird.

@sandwedgeking: Hey neighbor! I did add the backrest to the benches and it looked great, but after doing Mopurglar's idea it looked "overfenced".

@johnny50373 : That would be great, sadly I don't have valentine's stuff, I will see if they give it again next february.

@mopurglar: Great idea, I like how it looks.

JimJ321 wrote:

jofre_nash wrote:
Hello TSTO addicts!
I need your creative opinion. I have finished my Springfield park and I am open for all your criticism (positive or negative):


What do you think?

No me gusta!

@JimJ321: What would you change?

Hi neighbour, wondered why you hadn't been on for a few days, like you said you have your big screen in 3d and it looks good, only thing I noticed is the grass showing in your big screen, I have mine with the pavement behind it. Your town looks good as always, I see you have made some 3d around your stonecutters buildings and your low wi fi note to your neighbours.

Well i guess I'm gonna be the "heavy"...

I don't think it's on par with the rest of your town, neighbor.

Like even your new Lodge which looks like a grand fortress, is better and more typical of the fantastic 3d stuff you have done already.

The park looks like you took several ideas you have seen elsewhere and mashed them. Golf, movie screen... But none are done up in the great way I've seen you do so far.

And the concrete slabs just don't line up right to do many 3d designs because they leave gaps. So it looks like the two upper slabs are just out on the path while the rest are within the center grassy area. It doesn't work for me.

It also takes up a lot of real estate, yet doesn't have the same impact as your other excellent large scale designs. So I give it a C+ and look forward to your redesign when you return to civilization! *

* harsh criticism intended only to motivate you to outdo yourself! Which you already knew you could do better or you would not have asked like this. Go! Go! Go! I'll be watching neighbor! :D