@emorrill/LNM I enjoyed reading the chapters. I hope you write more and let your Mom post it.
Poor Jane, I would have been embarrassed and a lot upset. :grin: I guess she knows Jessie and his ways so she wasn't too upset.
I love your descriptions. Very vivid and makes the story very interesting to read. I can feel what is going on without pictures.
The horses are beautiful. I love the names for both of them.
That is a strange looking house with no windows!
Wow! I'm amazed he went in but he didn't mind busting in the bathroom on Jane either. :grin:
She followed him! Dag girl!
You wrote that chapter so well I was terrified for Jane and Jessie.
hmmm, where are the horses?
I sure hope they find the horses. At least Jennifer thought of something to do to find them.
Well bummer that they didn't find them. I hope they turn up safe and sound soon.
I'm looking forward to more.