"twiddle3;c-16523750" wrote:
"kittymeow;c-16523738" wrote:
Omg that was so awesome to read Twiddle! I really really loved it, I appreciate all the hard work you put into this episode. <3
I love how you write Felix, I had a good laugh at a few things. :D
Also did I mess up with his introduction? I assumed they were being invited to a murder mystery night and not a dinner party (I have no idea) The others probably wondered why he said "may the best person win" lol
And and no one else noticed the killer in the kitchen door window???? :fearful:
I'm glad you liked it, Kitty, I hope you will like what I have done with Felix's character too. :)
I don't think it noticed with his introduction if anything it adds to the intrigue, perhaps some had prior knowledge as to what was going to happen at the party? Or maybe not everyone had the same invite? >:)
Unfortunately, some of Felix's lines were cut this episode, I moved them to the next one because I thought they would make much more sense for him to have certain scenes after Ms Depart "departed" However he has a much bigger part to play in the next ep, As it's title suggests. ;)
Same goes for Dr Gale, She originally had a much bigger part to play, But I switched some of the scenes around to the next ep for a better effect.
Well I love what you have done with him so far, he's exactly as I pictured him!
That's a very good point, it adds more to the mystery I guess. ;)
Ooooh, I just saw the title for the next episode. Now I'm very very excited, haha. I can't wait to see what you do next with Felix and with all the characters. Everyone is so different and I love that!
