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NovelistAnne
8 years agoNew Spectator
So I'm finally reading this story from the beginning and decided to reply per part and post my replies per reading session! Hope you are ready for a lot of feedback :).
part 1
Great start!! Poor Jared, he's still just a baby and I already feel sorry for him. You already pulled me into this story at the very first chapter ^^
part 2
Lol Jenni! What a woman! Come on Caroline, you can do better than to give into your cheating husband while the other woman is still in the room! Show some backbone!
part 3
Aww Connor is such a cutie as a toddler. So Joe went back to Caroline?
part 4
Poor Caroline. She needs a divorce! As a child of divorced parents I can vouch for it!! It's for the best, even for the kids. I'm a little confused about adult Connor existing? Lol.
part 5
Poor Paulo, that's the worst way to find out your dad has another kid somewhere...
part 6
Ohhh Joe you literally explained Bessie in the worst way possible :D. Men... and the kids witnessed it :(.
part 7
Good! They divorce. I'm glad they were able to solve the situation like adults. I got a hachi feeling with Jared and Paulo... (I cry whenever I watch hachi even when the movie is still happy because I already know it's going to end sad. Knowing Paulo ends up homeless makes me feel sad for Jared even though it's not happening yet lol).
part 8
Ohhh plot twist! This also means Paulo and Jamie Jolina aren't related! I wonder if that tale will have tail ;). I see now why you don't mind Izanami going after Vita haha.
part 9
So many child victims of parent drama here! D: Poor Xander. What a way to find out your dad isn't your actual dad. Can I jump into your game and slap all those cheating selfish adults?!
part 10
Lol they shut up for the sake of the kid? A little too late for that now isn't it...
part 11
Glad the brothers are getting along even though there is so much intrigue behind their existence. Xander took the news pretty well!
part 12
I feel sorry for Buster. He's the only one who didn't have an affair lol...
That's it for now, thanks for entertaining my on my 2 hour train ride with this awesome story! I'll be reading more of it soon ^^.
part 1
Great start!! Poor Jared, he's still just a baby and I already feel sorry for him. You already pulled me into this story at the very first chapter ^^
part 2
Lol Jenni! What a woman! Come on Caroline, you can do better than to give into your cheating husband while the other woman is still in the room! Show some backbone!
part 3
Aww Connor is such a cutie as a toddler. So Joe went back to Caroline?
part 4
Poor Caroline. She needs a divorce! As a child of divorced parents I can vouch for it!! It's for the best, even for the kids. I'm a little confused about adult Connor existing? Lol.
part 5
Poor Paulo, that's the worst way to find out your dad has another kid somewhere...
part 6
Ohhh Joe you literally explained Bessie in the worst way possible :D. Men... and the kids witnessed it :(.
part 7
Good! They divorce. I'm glad they were able to solve the situation like adults. I got a hachi feeling with Jared and Paulo... (I cry whenever I watch hachi even when the movie is still happy because I already know it's going to end sad. Knowing Paulo ends up homeless makes me feel sad for Jared even though it's not happening yet lol).
part 8
Ohhh plot twist! This also means Paulo and Jamie Jolina aren't related! I wonder if that tale will have tail ;). I see now why you don't mind Izanami going after Vita haha.
part 9
So many child victims of parent drama here! D: Poor Xander. What a way to find out your dad isn't your actual dad. Can I jump into your game and slap all those cheating selfish adults?!
part 10
Lol they shut up for the sake of the kid? A little too late for that now isn't it...
part 11
Glad the brothers are getting along even though there is so much intrigue behind their existence. Xander took the news pretty well!
part 12
I feel sorry for Buster. He's the only one who didn't have an affair lol...
That's it for now, thanks for entertaining my on my 2 hour train ride with this awesome story! I'll be reading more of it soon ^^.