Sea Legs (Updated 09*21*19)
After a little encouragement from other players I've finally decided to "move" my story from another thread to this one. Moves in quotes simply because I'm not moving anything, just copying the posts...
Forum Discussion
@AbellaKellaher Wow! This was a deep chapter and you are such a great writer. :star:
I don't blame Karlie in the least for how she feels!
Ammon is so wise... :blush: He reminds me of Michael Holland in my story. ;)
Not only did that reverse psychology work well on her, but it validated her feelings of hurt and it also made her see just how much she still cares for her mom. <3 Well played Ammon! (Now if I can use that wisdom in the future with my daughter. ;) )
The dialogue between Karlie and Shari was fantastically written! :star: I could feel the deep emotions between both women.
Interesting with the abandoned house of the Blackmailer...
^Oooh, I like how you wrote that. :)
No! The scene switches to Ammon! :( ;) :p
^Ha ha! Right!? :lol: That is me with math!
Oh yay we are back to Karlie and Shari! :relieved:
Once again you epically describe the creepiness of the old beach shack. ;) :star:
Truly, Shari is a very selfless person. <3
Well that warbling spinner thing and it's effect on Karlie was a bit scary there for a minute. :flushed: Shari whacks her with a pillow! :lol: Gotta do what you gotta do right?
Hmm...what's with that book? ?
WHO was saying, "she has no idea and won't until I'm gone?" :open_mouth:
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We've ALL been there with the baby dancing on our bladder! :lol: (Well, all of us who've been pregnant. :p )
I hope Niella comes around soon, but can't blame her for feeling just as hurt or even more than Karlie.
Aww, that moment between Ammon (Hapi) and Shari (Adrastria). <3
Oh Shari you look great!
Ammon talking to the baby belly, that was so cute! :blush:
Uh oh, did Karlie head on back to the beach shack? By herself!? :flushed:
I very much look forward to more! I'm loving this story! :smiley:
I don't blame Karlie in the least for how she feels!
Ammon is so wise... :blush: He reminds me of Michael Holland in my story. ;)
Not only did that reverse psychology work well on her, but it validated her feelings of hurt and it also made her see just how much she still cares for her mom. <3 Well played Ammon! (Now if I can use that wisdom in the future with my daughter. ;) )
The dialogue between Karlie and Shari was fantastically written! :star: I could feel the deep emotions between both women.
Interesting with the abandoned house of the Blackmailer...
As if the wind was warning them personally, it howled through the broken windows.
^Oooh, I like how you wrote that. :)
No! The scene switches to Ammon! :( ;) :p
deciphering the code and determining the parameters and function was nothing short of mental Olympics of galactic proportions
^Ha ha! Right!? :lol: That is me with math!
Oh yay we are back to Karlie and Shari! :relieved:
Once again you epically describe the creepiness of the old beach shack. ;) :star:
Truly, Shari is a very selfless person. <3
Well that warbling spinner thing and it's effect on Karlie was a bit scary there for a minute. :flushed: Shari whacks her with a pillow! :lol: Gotta do what you gotta do right?
Hmm...what's with that book? ?
WHO was saying, "she has no idea and won't until I'm gone?" :open_mouth:
----
We've ALL been there with the baby dancing on our bladder! :lol: (Well, all of us who've been pregnant. :p )
I hope Niella comes around soon, but can't blame her for feeling just as hurt or even more than Karlie.
Aww, that moment between Ammon (Hapi) and Shari (Adrastria). <3
Oh Shari you look great!
Ammon talking to the baby belly, that was so cute! :blush:
Uh oh, did Karlie head on back to the beach shack? By herself!? :flushed:
I very much look forward to more! I'm loving this story! :smiley:
