Sea Legs (Updated 09*21*19)

"emorrill;c-17215366" wrote:
@AbellaKellaher Wow! This was a deep chapter and you are such a great writer. :star:
I don't blame Karlie in the least for how she feels!
Ammon is so wise... :blush: He reminds me of Michael Holland in my story. ;)
Not only did that reverse psychology work well on her, but it validated her feelings of hurt and it also made her see just how much she still cares for her mom. <3 Well played Ammon! (Now if I can use that wisdom in the future with my daughter. ;) )

The qualities of good men traverse many forms <3 It doesn't surprise me in the least that we value the same character traits :)

I love the way you put that - "it validated her feelings of hurt and it also made her see just how much she still cares for her mom." It was a dialog that really took a bit of consideration because, imagining myself in either of their shoes, it was important that he didn't alienate her or make her feel he was picking sides, but, as you said, remind her how much she and her mother mean to each other.

And may we all be that wise in the moment with our children!

The dialogue between Karlie and Shari was fantastically written! :star: I could feel the deep emotions between both women.

Thank you! :blush: I'm glad it's conveying!

Oh yay we are back to Karlie and Shari! :relieved:
Once again you epically describe the creepiness of the old beach shack. ;) :star:
Truly, Shari is a very selfless person. <3
Well that warbling spinner thing and it's effect on Karlie was a bit scary there for a minute. :flushed: Shari whacks her with a pillow! :lol: Gotta do what you gotta do right?
Hmm...what's with that book? ?

:joy: :joy: I figured it was a better bet than trying to splash anything she might think was water into her face! Could have ended up a vampire or something! :joy:

WHO was saying, "she has no idea and won't until I'm gone?" :open_mouth:

Hmmmm, who indeed... If only there was some way to see.... ;)

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We've ALL been there with the baby dancing on our bladder! :lol: (Well, all of us who've been pregnant. :p )
I hope Niella comes around soon, but can't blame her for feeling just as hurt or even more than Karlie.
Aww, that moment between Ammon (Hapi) and Shari (Adrastria). <3
Oh Shari you look great!
Ammon talking to the baby belly, that was so cute! :blush:
Uh oh, did Karlie head on back to the beach shack? By herself!? :flushed:
I very much look forward to more! I'm loving this story! :smiley:

I'm so happy you're enjoying it! I have to say it's quite an experience, writing a story. Never really done it before and I rather enjoy it!

Next chapter incoming next comment!