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tiareleine
14 years ago

Shattered Light - A Rainbowcy - Chapter 12: That Little Development (11/26/14) [Hiatus Continues]

Hello all, and welcome to my Rainbowcy, Shattered Light. I have become addicted to berry sweet sims, and have decided to jump on the Rainbowcy Bandwagon (as I've heard it called) Please enjoy my story...
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Wings1075
14 years ago
Hi.

I liked the chapter. The speech seems pretty natural to me. I do think it was a little short though. That's my only complaint but then I do tend to get a little wordy at times so I may not be best judge of that. lol.

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