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tiareleine
14 years ago

Shattered Light - A Rainbowcy - Chapter 12: That Little Development (11/26/14) [Hiatus Continues]

Hello all, and welcome to my Rainbowcy, Shattered Light. I have become addicted to berry sweet sims, and have decided to jump on the Rainbowcy Bandwagon (as I've heard it called) Please enjoy my story...
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tiareleine
13 years ago
Brigid wrote:
Well I'm pathetic, because I wrote a new story, then re-read it and cried. How sad am I?! How could I cry AT MY OWN STORY? I WROTE IT! I knew what was coming >.<

Sooooo pathetic.

Also yeah, I like when stories show things instead of telling them. And I think you did a great job of showing it. I could tell right away that was what was going on with him. That's good writing!


That's not pathetic. If something is emotional then it's emotional, it doesn't matter who wrote it or if you know what's coming.

Thank you! I wasn't sure if it was too subtle.

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