Showcasing Your Lots Workshop III

kquinn1990 wrote:
Hey Fid. Here is a Victorian house I just built. Would like feedback on it.

It looks like it's not doing to well on the forums and exchange for some reason? I had this up since afternoon yesterday and only 84 download, and a couple comments.

Thanks.

http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/280534.page

kquinn1990

Gosh kquinn,

I don't know what to tell you. How is everyone else doing on the Exchange? Maybe there's something going on that's effecting everyone.

I think the covershot is good; I doubt that is the reason. It should at least be pulling 200 to 300 or more.

Now, concerning your house; I think the roof is a little weird. The colors are very pleasant. Now the garden up front is nice but I think it should have duplicated on the other side of the walk. The red door is a little out of it's element here; maybe another door would had been better. Something soft like the house. At least different colors for the door.

The interior; first photo; how about some curtains on those windows. I'm not really seeing the runner rug working here. Something more dramatic maybe. I think that would have been a perfect spot to give us a nice pattern.

Kitchen; could use some decor of some sort.

Dining room; very well put together. I like the color scheme also but maybe a little lighter on the turquoise. White curtains would have been better. Easy chair pattern is off. Probably regular fabric without a pattern and CAS'd to turquoise like the walls.

Living room; your colors are all over the place here kquinn. I would have suggested a complete redo on the colors and patterns in this room. Furniture is well placed and well chosen.

Master bedroom; again, your colors seem off. I also don't think this type of bed belongs in this room; styles are completely off.

Guest bedroom; hopefully your guest is a monk and will enjoy this room's bareness. Needs some wall art here. Add some life into this room. Plants would be great. You've got green already and a little more won't hurt.

Boy's bedroom; lighten up on the green some on the walls. How about a nice geometric pattern for a couple of the walls. You can add some more white that way. The blue in the area rugs beneath the bed doesn't work here at all.

Girl's bedroom; lighten up on the pink.

Kquinn, If you would share with us before you uploaded, I'm sure we could give you some good advice before you upload. Just a suggestion.

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