Mmhmm. Yup. I remember the days when my writing was similar to that XD (and the times it was much, much worse). Even the difference in quality in my writing has such a drastic difference in it compared to how it was at the beginning of 2013 and at the end of 2013. Just keeping at it and trying to improve really does make such an impact.
At the beginning of my story I was trying to do my Sim's narration as if everything was happening at the moment she was speaking about it, but I would shift into the past tense without noticing it. Now I've decided to stick with the past tense (save for a few parts here and there where the present tense is needed), but yeah, that first part is such a mess. So don't worry about reading it right away :lol: I'm hoping to get to making some improvements over the weekend.
Ooh, I'm curious to see who you might pick. Now I want to read the next chapters even more :mrgreen:
