"several years’ worth of tears started streamed down Charlie’s face" :bawling:
I absolute love how you make your main characters manipulative! Everyone always aims at making them likeable but making them interesting is so much more! Ha! Not even Mika whom we believed the good one for a long time was who she seemed to be at first sight.
One the one hand I appreciate Naomi's worries for Charlie but on the other, this seems a bit sudden and... passionate. Either it's her own hurt that burst out after so many years or there's something else.
