What happened in your sims 3 game today?
Hey everyone. :) I've been playing Sunset Valley (along with the W mod) and I just made some CRAZY things happen yesterday and today with the Langerak Family. Hee hee ;) Well, I thought I would pic...
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I was browsing the old forums and stumbled upon one of my old stories, HM/BATB crossover. I reread it and cringed at the writing style. XD
graceymanorsLol! 😄 That's why it has been such a joy to watch you grow as a writer for the past few years. 😊⭐
I now want to rewrite it, with proper descriptions. XD
Like "
William took Belle's hand gently, giving it a kiss.He was much more charming than Gaston.Belle didn't understand though.He seemed so mean, course and unrefined; yet here he is treating her nicer than anyone has ever done.Obviously, there was something there, that she hadn't seen before."
Should really be
"William gently took Belle's hand and placed a soft kiss upon it, his touch filled with a tenderness that took her by surprise. He was far more charming than Gaston, a stark contrast to the rough exterior she had come to expect. Belle was puzzled. William had always seemed so harsh, coarse, and unrefined, yet here he was, treating her with a kindness she had never known. There was clearly something more to him, something hidden beneath the surface that she hadn’t noticed before."
BOOM! ⭐ Yassss! 😁🥰
I think every single writer thinks their old stuff is cringe. Some of my favorite (very successful) authors have said they'd like to pull their old books or edit them because they've learned so much since. But there is a raw talent there that I absolutely love in the old books. (Harlan Coben looking at you). I sure cringe when I look at some of my first sims videos so know how you feel but I bet your story is good and would like to see it if you want to link it. :)
