A turtle's Journey * Update October 2
https://i.imgur.com/liwUNKFh.png Everything has a beginning, and everything has an end ....... Here we start with the end which at the same time is the beginning of a new life I have written stories...
Forum Discussion
@MonaSolstraale All caught up! :mrgreen:
Do you mind if I comment on your writing style? The text between pictures often has the "." missing at the end of the sentence. For me it reads easier if it's there. Maybe you can add it to sentences in future chapters? :blush:
Spoiler
I feel bad for Finn. I mean, everyone hates the welcome wagon and their spongy fruit cake, that's pretty much a given. xD But to instantly hate all strangers that come knocking on his door... that's not a good thing. I wonder what happened to make him become like that. It seems like something worse than bullies.
Do you mind if I comment on your writing style? The text between pictures often has the "." missing at the end of the sentence. For me it reads easier if it's there. Maybe you can add it to sentences in future chapters? :blush:
