Amazon Challenge: Tribe Isla (3/14)

Oh goodness at the banner already I thought of how dark both of the twins are... Didn't really take a closer look at them the last chapter. And when Melody remarked that they resemble Kale's brother (I do know his name but avoid to write it since it was censored the last time :D ), it was the sudden realization that they are. Oh, Kat. What have you done to Kale! :hushed: Now he will be hunted and let's hope they won't get him :cold_sweat: If you knew, you'd feel so guilty... But you can't do anything about it any more now.

Edit: The same I told @lilypadmeulin of course applies to you and anyone else, as well. If you don't like a chapter, don't tell your readers before. If you feel like you should, do it after they've read and given feedback. Otherwise, they'll look out for mistakes even if it is unconsciously. I've made that mistake myself the one or other time and it is pleasant to get assurance that the chapter was good, but you'd get that anyway. Personally, I agree with @lilypadmeulin that I liked it very much!
Another things I forgot to mention, I'm not quite sure what to think about Melody. Sure she seems like a hard woman but she does care about the queen a lot and at least she smiled at Kat's children. Which tells me she can't be that mean. For now, it seems like she's following the rules and while this means disregarding ethics, can we hold it against her? She'd be punished if she didn't, she grew up with those certainties.