Between2Worlds [Story] 06/04
https://i.ibb.co/xYcr7Zv/B2-WPart2-Banner.jpg Prologue here. Prologue here.
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@mercuryfoam
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I've reached chapter 5 and I have to say that I really praise your emphasis you Athena's isolation and exclusion. That her privileged life and all the gifts she has come with some very serious drawbacks. One can almost feel just how alone she feels.
I'm also very interested in this shadowy organisation and their business. So far it feels that this will be a deal with the devil, but I have to read and see.
I really like the way you've written Grim :-) With that said, I get the feeling that their jovial attitude is a mask to hide their guilt. After all, their job is collect souls. Souls of people who have someone who loves them, someone who doesn't want them gone.
Will post more later.
I'm also very interested in this shadowy organisation and their business. So far it feels that this will be a deal with the devil, but I have to read and see.
I really like the way you've written Grim :-) With that said, I get the feeling that their jovial attitude is a mask to hide their guilt. After all, their job is collect souls. Souls of people who have someone who loves them, someone who doesn't want them gone.
Will post more later.
