Between2Worlds [Story] 06/04
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@mercuryfoam Just finished reading chapter 6.
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I have to say that so far I can't help but notice classic pattern of damsel-knight mechanic. While well disguised, t is rather obvious - a girl lives an unhappy life, then something happens, guy intervenes and she gets involved in life full of adventure and romance. Granted, Athena is not exactly a damsel-in-distress and Curtis is no knight, but it so noticeable. I have to give you credit for well designed disguise. The take on this formula is a lot darker that i usually is.
AS for chapter 6 by itself, I think that this school has a secret of some sort. Everything is just too good. Everyone are too friendly. Impossible. Too good to be true. If that is what it is on the face value, then it SEVERELY undermines Athena's character.
And another thing. Forgive me for this, but for some reason I found entire chapter 6 to be incredibly boring. Other chapters so far had twists, something to keep reader guessing. Here? Not so much.
AS for chapter 6 by itself, I think that this school has a secret of some sort. Everything is just too good. Everyone are too friendly. Impossible. Too good to be true. If that is what it is on the face value, then it SEVERELY undermines Athena's character.
And another thing. Forgive me for this, but for some reason I found entire chapter 6 to be incredibly boring. Other chapters so far had twists, something to keep reader guessing. Here? Not so much.
