Between2Worlds [Story] 06/04
https://i.ibb.co/xYcr7Zv/B2-WPart2-Banner.jpg Prologue here. Prologue here.
Forum Discussion
@ArcherDK :smiley:
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Thank you for your honest feedback! Your observations are spot on as usual. I have thought about how overused the damsel-in distress theme is but decided to go ahead with it since it is my first writing and I wanted to do something I was familiar with. :D Yes, I'm sorry. I used to work in a very rough neighborhood and was very involved with the residents' lives. This story is reflective of that environment and things I've seen. I've cushioned it wherever I can.
Could you elaborate on " If that is what it is on the face value, then it SEVERELY undermines Athena's character"? I'm not too sure I understand this phrase and what it means.
And thank you for being candid. I hope it gets better in the next chapters (Usually I'll improve the next update but I've already published it :sweat_smile:) I'll definitely take on your advice for my current chapter. At the end of this story, which is right around the corner, I plan to take a step back and study where I can improve and what worked/didn't. So I'm grateful for your open feedback. It means a lot to me. :smile:
Thank you for your honest feedback! Your observations are spot on as usual. I have thought about how overused the damsel-in distress theme is but decided to go ahead with it since it is my first writing and I wanted to do something I was familiar with. :D Yes, I'm sorry. I used to work in a very rough neighborhood and was very involved with the residents' lives. This story is reflective of that environment and things I've seen. I've cushioned it wherever I can.
Could you elaborate on " If that is what it is on the face value, then it SEVERELY undermines Athena's character"? I'm not too sure I understand this phrase and what it means.
And thank you for being candid. I hope it gets better in the next chapters (Usually I'll improve the next update but I've already published it :sweat_smile:) I'll definitely take on your advice for my current chapter. At the end of this story, which is right around the corner, I plan to take a step back and study where I can improve and what worked/didn't. So I'm grateful for your open feedback. It means a lot to me. :smile:
