Between2Worlds [Story] 06/04
https://i.ibb.co/xYcr7Zv/B2-WPart2-Banner.jpg Prologue here. Prologue here.
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@ArcherDK
Thank you!
Thank you!
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I'll let you know when I post ch 17.21 if you're interested. That's in the next cycle actually.
Yes! I'm glad you feel that way about their relationship at this point. I wanted readers to feel uncomfortable here and I got what I want. They ARE very different people now and will be addressed in the epilogue. :smile:
I never intended to develop it beyond what is shown in 17.1. Everything else is reserved for season 2. :smile:
I think I've answered everything else.
.The other one would be Masato + Kirino. Very interesting characters that definitely could use more love.
I'll let you know when I post ch 17.21 if you're interested. That's in the next cycle actually.
With that said - why does she accept Curtis? Like, why? This is so forced, so out of nowhere. There was a recipe for PERFECT ending to their romance. Star-crossed lovers, everything is against them and "everything" wins. Sure, they are past their hardships, but they have changed. Both Athena and Curtis are just different people now. If Curtis didn't expect that, then he is a fool.
Yes! I'm glad you feel that way about their relationship at this point. I wanted readers to feel uncomfortable here and I got what I want. They ARE very different people now and will be addressed in the epilogue. :smile:
Magic part of the plot is just bad. Bad bad bad! Not because it is a bad idea or because author has no skill, oh no! It's just underdeveloped. It needed more. A lot more
I never intended to develop it beyond what is shown in 17.1. Everything else is reserved for season 2. :smile:
I think I've answered everything else.
