Between2Worlds [Story] 06/04

I am really curious to see what information Eva gets from Sugi. I think she is going to get herself in trouble. Or at the very least, discover that there is actually magic, and see her go through some cognitive dissonance when she discovers that what she thought was right, was actually not. I know I sound a little harsh to Eva's character; I don't mind her as a character, I've known a few people like her, so I can see where she is coming from. But I also sort of want her to slow down for a second. I feel like she's quivering with the amount of energy she exudes. Which is a good thing; you've portrayed her really well in your writing. :) I like Isaia, and I could be totally wrong about his character, but I just get the feeling he knows a lot more than he lets on and I think Eva would be wise to listen to him.