Between2Worlds [Story] 06/04

Hm.. You might see her at the end of Ch 1 or 2. I intend to introduce everyone fairly quickly. No promises though considering my whimsical nature :wink:

Oh I don't think you're harsh at all. For all of Eva's vibrance and energy, she has some strong shortcomings and I'm glad you highlighted them. Tbh, I was expecting them to be pointed out much sooner. Then again I only just started so if it isn't obvious now, it'll be obvious later haha! Thanks! I mean its always the quiet ones we have to watch out for. That cliche must've come from somewhere. :wink: Even if its unfounded, I think we can learn from everyone, not just the loud ones. So yeah, personally I think Eva needs to slow down too, but oh she is so fun to write. :lol: