Between2Worlds [Story] 06/04
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That was such a packed chapter! I already left you a huge essay on WP, and I still haven't even touched on everything that happened...
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The segments with Eva and Nathan were incredibly sweet! I love their friendship. So why do I feel like you're putting all these heartwarmind scenes with them only to rip our hearts out later? :cry: Speaking of hearts...
Roidth's ritual, yikes! Who had to die for that one... I hope at least he was efficient and the source of the heart and the symbol on the ground were from the same person... On a positive note, I guess he's not as indifferent to Einor's death as he let us belive, so that's something... though he probably just wants her back so that she can continue to do his bidding.
So Rai lives, just about. I hope he makes it. I wonder what he'll have to say about what went down when he wakes up. Fingers crossed that he does wake up.
The only person we haven't checked in on in this is Isaias. I wonder what happened with him? Clearly he wasn't rushed to the hospital like Rai, so they wouldn't have found him at the scene unconscious... I wonder if he teleported somewhere.
I love what you did with the different lighting throughout this update. Your use of lighting and the different filters is always impeccable to highlight the mood of the chapter, but I thought it worked really well to highlight the contrast between the different scenes in the chapter, so that even though we only got short snippets, the mood changed with every scene instantly.
I'm not gonna lie, I will totally have B2W withdrawals :D But I'm so impressed with your CC making, that is awesome that you're digging more into it. A couple's dance interraction is definitely much needed!
Edit: I still forgot one more thing! Seeing the White Wraiths in the hospital taking off their masks gave me all kinds of soft fuzzy vibes. They suddenly just reminded me of little kids that have really overdone it when they were playing and now one of them wound up hurt.
Roidth's ritual, yikes! Who had to die for that one... I hope at least he was efficient and the source of the heart and the symbol on the ground were from the same person... On a positive note, I guess he's not as indifferent to Einor's death as he let us belive, so that's something... though he probably just wants her back so that she can continue to do his bidding.
So Rai lives, just about. I hope he makes it. I wonder what he'll have to say about what went down when he wakes up. Fingers crossed that he does wake up.
The only person we haven't checked in on in this is Isaias. I wonder what happened with him? Clearly he wasn't rushed to the hospital like Rai, so they wouldn't have found him at the scene unconscious... I wonder if he teleported somewhere.
I love what you did with the different lighting throughout this update. Your use of lighting and the different filters is always impeccable to highlight the mood of the chapter, but I thought it worked really well to highlight the contrast between the different scenes in the chapter, so that even though we only got short snippets, the mood changed with every scene instantly.
I'm not gonna lie, I will totally have B2W withdrawals :D But I'm so impressed with your CC making, that is awesome that you're digging more into it. A couple's dance interraction is definitely much needed!
Edit: I still forgot one more thing! Seeing the White Wraiths in the hospital taking off their masks gave me all kinds of soft fuzzy vibes. They suddenly just reminded me of little kids that have really overdone it when they were playing and now one of them wound up hurt.
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