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MrsRacooney
5 years agoNew Novice
Seems like I missed quite a bit...
Regarding 1.13: The name Odysseus confuses me each single time I read it. Heavy déjà-vus :D And here, the Calientes enter the stage... With a girl-child. Well, well, it seems the goddess has not entirely forsaken Hesperia. And Molpe is right. Polgara shouldn't have a child just yet, she has enough to do with Anikka's education at the moment.
1.14: So Molpe is still not quite sure if so-called Diana isn't an assassin... I mean, could still be. The chances of an Amazon tribe welcoming a young woman and her little daughter are rather good, and their enemies would of course know that. However, she sounded sincerely pressured and desperate. (Also, I like that you incorporated a rule of hospitality. That was a large part of many societies after all)
Regarding 1.13: The name Odysseus confuses me each single time I read it. Heavy déjà-vus :D And here, the Calientes enter the stage... With a girl-child. Well, well, it seems the goddess has not entirely forsaken Hesperia. And Molpe is right. Polgara shouldn't have a child just yet, she has enough to do with Anikka's education at the moment.
1.14: So Molpe is still not quite sure if so-called Diana isn't an assassin... I mean, could still be. The chances of an Amazon tribe welcoming a young woman and her little daughter are rather good, and their enemies would of course know that. However, she sounded sincerely pressured and desperate. (Also, I like that you incorporated a rule of hospitality. That was a large part of many societies after all)