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Seasoned Ace

10 years ago

Heffner Legacy: [Updated 09/05] 4.29 The Cold Shoulder

Hi everyone. I've started the Build Newcrest Legacy Challenge and posted the first chapter. I'm all new to this and I was hoping someone would read it and tell me their opinion. Here's the link: ht...

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Maladi

Seasoned Ace

10 years ago

"ThePlumbob;14262590" wrote:
This is so fun! Beryl and Tony have great chemistry. Let's hope the police doesn't break her.

As for your question whether you're inconveniencing the other possible heirs with this subplot... What other possible heirs? :D

We'll see in the next chapter what they want from her.

Poor other heirs. At least Bao is taken care of. :smiley: