Forum Discussion

Seasoned Ace

10 years ago

Heffner Legacy: [Updated 09/05] 4.29 The Cold Shoulder

Hi everyone. I've started the Build Newcrest Legacy Challenge and posted the first chapter. I'm all new to this and I was hoping someone would read it and tell me their opinion. Here's the link: ht...

stories

Maladi

Seasoned Ace

10 years ago

"sabreene;14281789" wrote:
Oh, so good! Maybe being brought it did her good -- gave her time to admit her feelings to herself! Can't wait to see what happens next. (And thank you for the comment about my banner - I totally missed it until now, doh!)

Exactly! Everything was happening too fast and she needed a moment to process it.