Heffner Legacy: [Updated 09/05] 4.29 The Cold Shoulder

Hi everyone.
I've started the Build Newcrest Legacy Challenge and posted the first chapter. I'm all new to this and I was hoping someone would read it and tell me their opinion.
Here's the link: http://maladi.weebly.com/the-heffner-legacy.html

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4,015 Replies

Sabreene
10 years ago
Ahh, leaving it right there before the Beryl and Tony meet up! I can't wait to see their next interactions. Great chapter!
Maladi
Seasoned Ace
10 years ago
The waiting is over. Chapter 2.14 is HERE.

http://s30.postimg.org/vi3rqvbtt/chapter214.png
Julyvee94
10 years ago
Awww Yissss :D The ship has sailed
Maladi
Seasoned Ace
10 years ago
"Julyvee94;14303972" wrote:
Awww Yissss :D The ship has sailed

:smiley: I've just posted it and you've already read it? That's crazy, you know? :smile: Hours of work...
Julyvee94
10 years ago
"Maladi777;14303990" wrote:
"Julyvee94;14303972" wrote:
Awww Yissss :D The ship has sailed

:smiley: I've just posted it and you've already read it? That's crazy, you know? :smile: Hours of work...

you can ask @CitizenErased14 :D I'm the speediest of readers
CitizenErased14
10 years ago
"Julyvee94;14304016" wrote:
"Maladi777;14303990" wrote:
"Julyvee94;14303972" wrote:
Awww Yissss :D The ship has sailed

:smiley: I've just posted it and you've already read it? That's crazy, you know? :smile: Hours of work...

you can ask @CitizenErased14 :D I'm the speediest of readers

Truth :lol:
Maladi
Seasoned Ace
10 years ago
"Julyvee94;14304016" wrote:
"Maladi777;14303990" wrote:
"Julyvee94;14303972" wrote:
Awww Yissss :D The ship has sailed

:smiley: I've just posted it and you've already read it? That's crazy, you know? :smile: Hours of work...

you can ask @CitizenErased14 :D I'm the speediest of readers

I noticed that before, but today you were even faster than I expected. :smiley:
mariafuchs488
10 years ago
Fitst yes finally they are together <3 and second at some of the pics stands underneath "Zum Bearbeiten klicken" should there be a text I didn't see?
Maladi
Seasoned Ace
10 years ago
"Marialein;14304142" wrote:
Fitst yes finally they are together <3 and second at some of the pics stands underneath "Zum Bearbeiten klicken" should there be a text I didn't see?

Thanks for pointing it out. No, there isn't supposed to be text under some of the pictures. I need to fix that it doesn't show the sign that there should be.

I'm also glad they finally admitted their feelings to each other. Sort of. :smile:
ThePlumbobBlog
10 years ago
Ooh I wonder how this is going to continue, considering Tony can't really stick around anywhere for too long! Beryl looked really pretty in the last chapter :)