Lucky Girl - Completed

Overall, I found the outing with Jude to the cemetery/abandoned church to be kind of sweet. Unlike other readers, I didn't get any feeling of danger. But my personality is an odd combination of people-pleasing and i-am-going-to-do-whatever-i-want. By the time I was 13, I stopped getting in trouble with my parents and when I was 16 - 18 of course I wouldn't go anywhere I didn't want to go so maybe I'm less likely to see Jude as controlling. Because Evie can open her mouth and tell him that she wants him to stop fooling around and take her home at any time, Jude didn't bother me here. Ideally, he should communicate more, but he's young too so I imagine he's a bit thoughtless. I also had a good group of friends growing up so if any guy did anything shady or malicious, he would be 100% instantly outcast, embarrassed, and lose everything, jeopardizing his entire future. My main concern would have been let's not get in trouble for trespassing and let's not get hurt (because we don't want to have to explain dumb teenage behavior to a doctor/parents/others and look like fools ("Oh yeah, my friend turned off the only light available while we were in this abandoned falling apart church in the middle of the night to see some stained glass window and talk about ghosts...")).

I should add that I like your writing style. It's nice and atmospheric. This chapter shows it quite well.