New Beginnings - Building Newcrest *07-11-22*

Love how you wove the epilogue and the prologue together. Nice to see how Ben feels about his family and extended family members. I am surprised by a few of his feelings and not by most. Love the look Sofia had when Ben kissed Gemma and the horror she felt when dragged away for a makeover. I was thinking what a cute couple Ben and Sofia would make. But then I think Ben has a bunch of growing up to do and some maturity to gain before he's ready for something serious. Maybe Sofia will be the one and maybe not. I try not to hope to much for certain character's as I seem to get my heart broke so much. Wonderful start to a story! :)