Old Book Club Thread - Check out the New One!

"BabyDollAnne;13866753" wrote:

"CathyTea;13866660" wrote:

"BabyDollAnne;13866546" wrote:
so guuuuys.. being cheeky before my chance is over, what did you think of my series so far? It's my first and i'm super excited about getting/reading your guys feedback :3 (literally screenshot every comment about mine)

I love your story, Anne. Here are a few of the things I especially love about it:

1. The pacing. Your chapters are short--which, given the emotional impact of your story, is really effective! If they were longer, then the emotional impact wouldn't be so immediate, I feel. The shorter length also really helps us to be able to fill in details. Another part of the pacing you handle exceptionally well is moving your story right along. You don't waste words or draw things out with summary--you just present what happens and this keeps our interest. Along with this, I also really enjoy your use of the present tense.
2. You've got great characters and you're not afraid to explore all aspects of them. Your characters are round and fully developed.

I'll be looking forward to continuing to read this! :)

You have no idea how much your kind review means to me, youwere one of the people I'd really idolised as a future "I want to write as well as her!" And im just all tomato faced squealing in the corner because people say nice things about my writing