I tell ya, I've read this over probably a few times... but this part still gets me everytime.
Jeremy and Geoffrey... LOL I swear
I'm still exploring the city...is your wife with you?" said Jeremy, looking around.
"Erm no....she's got an important work do this evening?" said Geoffrey, sheepishly.
"Sorry to hear that"
"It's not uncommon for her to work late. Very late sometimes...it's a safe job"
"Regular pay, benefits?" said Jeremy.
"No, an actual safe job, like in a bank"
"Deposits?"
"Erm....the opposite" said Geoffrey, nervously.