Tales From The Myst Update: Touching Grass

"SnowBnuuy;c-18004248" wrote:
Second chapter:

Spoiler

Ghosts advocating for themselves is an interesting idea actually. It’s kind of sad that they need Guidry to speak for them because the living like him; It’s sad because people don’t care about others’ rights unless that person is, or makes themselves, palatable to the majority- And even if you do make yourself palatable, people just take the comfort from that and give you nothing in return. With any luck the living will start taking them seriously, otherwise who knows what the ghosts will have to do to get what they want?

"haneul;c-18004278" wrote:
Sorry you lost your original save, but it's nice to see that you have something new that can now flourish almost phoenix-like from that. Your concept of The Myst is interesting. I'm curious to see who else has made The Myst their home. Best of luck to the ghosts. I wonder if there was any malicious intent behind their lack of representation or if they were just overlooked.

I usually avoid premades, so sometimes I don't even recognize them in others' stories, but I'm familiar with both Guidry and Morgyn, and I really like your take on Guidry.