Tales From The Myst Update: Touching Grass

Good update. :)
I'm repeating myself but I like your portrayal of Guidry quite a bit. I feel for him because it seems like (and correct me if I'm wrong) he either doesn't fully trust Morgyn or he's internalized his society's negative feelings towards ghosts. It was sad that he felt the need to describe the issue and his fellow ghosts as unimportant when they're clearly important to him (even though he did say that he had an important thing to do - which is a start?). I hope that he and Morgyn are able to become less apologetic about their troubles, and just say that what they care about is important, without adding caveats like "in its own way."