"rednenemon;15030929" wrote:
@noxxims
Go with the first one, unless, say, a character is going off in a very long story. And even then, perhaps try having other characters make comments in between, or do actions not involving dialogue.
@CathyTea
That looks interesting, and useful! :) (Now I just wish I had a Kindle to download it...)
I'm reading the PDF version on my laptop. When reading the first part, which talks about the biology and psychological response of trauma, I was thinking about the Racket-Rotters (and Annette and her crowd, for sure).
