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MrPlumbob
2 years agoRising Ace
@Belalucina
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When you wrote "today was her birthday" I got a little nervous. At least she made it through aging up without anything bad happening. I think the art lover trait suits her well, since she did love Thomas' art.
I love that picture of the toddlers that follows "oh dear..." :) Their poor sad faces though... :'(
Poor Hank! I really liked hank! Poor Emma.
Hopefully the apprenticeship goes well for Kimberly.
I like Kimberly's new look as well!
So there's magical flower magic in Camilla's veins. I did not expect that! :o :)
I didn't think it was cheesy at all! I like the direction you're going with this story. The part with Lady Goth and Camilla is very fairy tale like, while also being very original. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm excited to see what happens with Raven later on as well!
When you wrote "today was her birthday" I got a little nervous. At least she made it through aging up without anything bad happening. I think the art lover trait suits her well, since she did love Thomas' art.
I love that picture of the toddlers that follows "oh dear..." :) Their poor sad faces though... :'(
Poor Hank! I really liked hank! Poor Emma.
Hopefully the apprenticeship goes well for Kimberly.
I like Kimberly's new look as well!
So there's magical flower magic in Camilla's veins. I did not expect that! :o :)
I didn't think it was cheesy at all! I like the direction you're going with this story. The part with Lady Goth and Camilla is very fairy tale like, while also being very original. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm excited to see what happens with Raven later on as well!