"SnowBnuuy;c-18123570" wrote:
Just read Chapter 1 of this story and I like the vibe of it. Going to seemingly live the dream in a city of romance to get inspiration for your writing seems good at first, as writing inspiration always feels as we both know. But also it's a great set-up for drama later on down the line. Tartosa gives me a feel of 'that tourist hotspot that's not all it's cracked up to be' so there's every chance that the romance Danielle may see and find here might not be the idyllic variety ... but then I guess she can always channel any drama she encounters into her own writing.
I don't know if I'll have time to read the rest but the first chapter was a great start < 3
Thank you very much. That means a lot coming from another writer. Hopefully you can find the time to keep reading, but if not at least you enjoyed the part you did read.?