"haneul;c-18127293" wrote:
To be clear, I never thought Under the Tartosan Sun was messed up or anything negative. I really like your characters at whatever pace their romance takes. I also like your hands-off (but hands-on if necessary) approach. Hopefully, something exciting will spontaneously happen. Slow slice-of-life stuff can be entertaining too though.
Oh no, I didn't take it that way, it did make me stop and take a closer look at my storytelling. I also need to keep in mind it doesn't have to be Pulitzer Prize winning material either.
Thank you @haneul.?