Under The Tartosan Sun
Table of contents: [ Spoiler ] Since this story has grown so much bigger than I ever imagined I feel like its time to borrow a page from some of my favorite SimLit writers and offer you a syn...
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"DaniRose2143;c-18188580" wrote:
Once I knew exactly what portions of the original post were over the line I made the decision to edit it and add some new elements to it instead of starting over. An awful lot of work went into the original. I didn’t want to throw it all away, start over, and delay Matteo and Liberty’s big moment any further. A big thank you to @EA_Cade for helping me sort out the edits that were needed, and to you the reader for sticking with this story and the inspiration you give me. We’re just getting started.❤️
You did a marvelous job of revision. Redrafts don't always have to be the way to go. I was less shocked with this version. Nice job.
