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mercuryfoam
5 years agoSeasoned Ace
Ahh.. I just want to say how lovely and relaxing your story is. (Okay I’m echoing the first ever comment I made on this thread but this was much needed so thank you! :blush: )
This chapter makes me feel for Ella. She’s so insecure about the relationships she makes, questioning their validity and connecting it with a ‘desirable’ or ‘undesirable’ part of her.
I’m in awe of how you infuse your knowledge in architecture into the story through Robert. It’s reflected in your narrative but that much more precious when expressed through him and conveys how deep his love for preservation of history and culture is. :blush:
I’m curious about Adriel’s visual challenge. Feel free not to answer if its a spoiler.
This chapter makes me feel for Ella. She’s so insecure about the relationships she makes, questioning their validity and connecting it with a ‘desirable’ or ‘undesirable’ part of her.
I’m in awe of how you infuse your knowledge in architecture into the story through Robert. It’s reflected in your narrative but that much more precious when expressed through him and conveys how deep his love for preservation of history and culture is. :blush:
I’m curious about Adriel’s visual challenge. Feel free not to answer if its a spoiler.
Spoiler
Is the color distorted image a sneak peak of how Adriel sees color? At first I thought Adriel might have complete or Red-green color blindness since those are common. But if he’s mixing up her skin color, maybe he has blue-yellow color-blindness. But man I love how colorful the world looks through his eyes. So I’m wondering if Robert has tetrachromacy. And since this is fiction maybe you’ve combined Adriel to have both tetrachromacy and color-blindness! I’m getting ahead of myself. Bottom line is, I’m curious as to how much it impacts Adriel’s vision of the world, but if you rather show than tell by all means. I’m just impatient and putting my questions down :)
EDITED to add: I also noticed that Adriel sees Elia's eye color as purple still. D'aaaw see Elia. People can love you for who you are whatever your eye color is. I just hope Adriel manages to convey this to her. Or someone. :#
Is the color distorted image a sneak peak of how Adriel sees color? At first I thought Adriel might have complete or Red-green color blindness since those are common. But if he’s mixing up her skin color, maybe he has blue-yellow color-blindness. But man I love how colorful the world looks through his eyes. So I’m wondering if Robert has tetrachromacy. And since this is fiction maybe you’ve combined Adriel to have both tetrachromacy and color-blindness! I’m getting ahead of myself. Bottom line is, I’m curious as to how much it impacts Adriel’s vision of the world, but if you rather show than tell by all means. I’m just impatient and putting my questions down :)
EDITED to add: I also noticed that Adriel sees Elia's eye color as purple still. D'aaaw see Elia. People can love you for who you are whatever your eye color is. I just hope Adriel manages to convey this to her. Or someone. :#