Willingly Writing Reading Circle (On Hiatus)

I just posted the fourth chapter of "Until it Breaks" and looking at the writing this is one of my favourite I've written (I've written 10). It really adds a lot to the story and brings in a lot of suspense. The screenshots were kinda hard because it involves a party and the party guests just didn't do what they were supposed to do. But it worked out in the end :)

EDIT: Oh, here's the link :) Chapter 4 - Shocked and Shaken