7 years ago
Improve grammar and spelling
Flawed grammar and spelling can tarnish the reputation of any franchise. I want this game to grow, and so I offer my constructive criticism. Yes, I am known to be a grammar police officer.
Please, run official announcements by someone who have above average Written English skills, and google when in doubt. It doesn't have to be perfect, just better. Like spelling the game's name correctly, and avoiding redundant phrases.
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Please, run official announcements by someone who have above average Written English skills, and google when in doubt. It doesn't have to be perfect, just better. Like spelling the game's name correctly, and avoiding redundant phrases.
Happy New Year Tiberium Alliance!
2019-01-02 10:30:10
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Hello Commanders,
we hope everyone has had a few quite holidays. With 2019, we are setting sights on our 8th anniversary with Command & Conquer: Tiberium Alliance. This year we are planning to launch another World Championship soon early this year and another Veteran Challenge after the summer. That and more surprises await us in 2019, and we hope you will join us once more.
Here’s to more armies to command and worlds to conquer – see you on the battlefield!
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Happy New Year, Commanders!
We hope everyone had a good time during the holidays. With 2019, we are setting sights on the 8th anniversary of Command & Conquer: Tiberium Alliances. This year, we are planning to launch another World Championship (very soon), and another Veteran Challenge after the summer. That, and more surprises, await us in 2019, and we hope you will join us once more.
Here’s to more armies to Command, and worlds to Conquer – see you on the battlefield!