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BluesyMoo
5 years ago

Please hire someone else to write the story next time

EA, please, the writing sucks. The interaction between characters is nothing like it is in actual military. There is too much fluff, people are not cynical and jaded enough (or at all), commanding officers have too much teenage angst, pilots sound like they're going on Disney rides.

Can you please hire a bootleg Tom Clancy to do the job next time? Look, here's an actual soldier guy who has written a book: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roland_Bartetzko And here's an actual pilot guy who has written books: https://www.cwlemoine.com/about/

Mitch Dyer should not be writing military stories. Yes, he's left EA and freelancing. No, please don't hire his services.

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  • SketchxthexGoat's avatar
    SketchxthexGoat
    5 years ago

    The story line and plot was Ok I guess, the character were fine the voice acting was fine but no character interaction and poor writing kind of killed the the story for me. 

  • Mettanine's avatar
    Mettanine
    5 years ago

    I thought the story was fine. Honestly, I don't want to feel like I'm in the actual military, I want to feel like I'm in a Star Wars movie. The game managed that, so I'm happy. I would have liked more actual interaction, instead of just choosing who to listen to, but other than that, I had no complaints.

  • MJMorrow's avatar
    MJMorrow
    5 years ago

    Excuse me. My message keeps getting deleted. If a company selling a game related to Star Wars can associate with persons supporting ANTIFA and BLM, they can have a chat with a Disney shareholder about how this is utterly inappropriate. If you are dealing in Star Wars, you are impacting Disney shareholders. Neo Marxists promote anti White racism and anarchic extremism.

    Associating Star Wars with folks supportive of anti White racism and anarchic extremism isn't doing Disney shareholders any favors. And I'm not going to get into the matter of the allegations regarding Tyler Westhause. With so many US Citizens out of work, there's no excuse for a supporter of Neo Marxism and a potential sexual predator working on anything Star Wars related. 

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