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24 days ago

Draak Davaron: Kit Concept

Lore: Once the padawan of General Obi Wan Kenobi, Draak rose to prominence after fighting Arkra and losing an arm in the process. He was then given command of the 332nd clone battalion alongside Commander Gress, and worked frequently with the 501st and 312th to win vital campaigns for the Republic. Draak eventually found a forbidden holocron that Arkra had once promised to him, and it revealed a terrible secret (that I will not say because it's the most pivotal piece of lore in this, but I'll let people speculate). Unable to cope with the Jedi lies and dogma, he renounced the order to follow a different, and much darker, path.

Despite his role as a tank, Draak deals a lot of damage to force users, especially the Jedi that, in his eyes, betrayed him with their cover-up. His abilities come from ideas for his character, such as massive increases in force power at the cost of grievous injuries, and a transformation mechanic that puts him dangerously close to the dark side. He would also be the second unit to have four zetas.

 

An immensely powerful force user and former Jedi general that is more alike to Arkra than he realises, Draak walks the line between light and dark, fiercely protects his new allies, and is unafraid to use his darkness to overwhelm his foes.

Unit Name - Draak Davaron

Tags - Light Side, Tank, Leader, Arkan Empire, Unaligned Force User

Mastery - Deflection Chance, Dodge Chance, Health, and Protection

 

Focused Prowess (Basic) (Final text, Zeta)

Deal Physical damage to target enemy twice and inflict Defence Down for 3 turns. If this is the first ability Draak uses during his turn, they already had Defence Down, are a Jedi, Sith or Unaligned Force User Tank also inflict Armour Shred. All Dark Side allies gain Advantage for 1 turn and all Light Side allies gain 10% turn meter.

 

Whirlwind Blade (Special 1, cooldown 4) (Final text, Omega)

Inflict Burning and Healing Immunity for 2 turns on all enemies, then deal Physical damage to them. Jedi, Sith and Unaligned Force Users can’t evade this attack. If Arkra is an enemy, he takes triple damage and is also inflicted with Daze and Speed Down for 3 turns, which can’t be evaded or resisted.

All allies recover 4% Health and Protection for each debuff inflicted and gain 4% turn meter for each debuff resisted.

 

Force Trance (Special 2, cooldown 6) (Final text, Zeta)

Deal Physical damage to all enemies, which can’t be countered, and deal massive damage to self. This damage can’t defeat Draak. Then, for each stack of Dark Ascension on him, revive a random defeated ally with 20% Health and Protection for each living enemy. Draak gains Unbound Power for 2 turns, which can’t be copied, dispelled or prevented.

Unbound Power: +150% Offense, -50% Defense, -40% Speed; whenever this character is damaged by an enemy, that enemy takes damage equal to 80% of this character’s Offense; this character’s appearance is altered while this effect is active

 

Break the Chains (Granted) (Final text)

Limit one use per battle. This ability can’t be used while Draak has allies. 

Draak dispels all debuffs on himself, recovers 100% Health and Protection, which can’t be prevented, then gains a bonus turn. He also loses his current ability set and gains three new abilities.

[Basic] Focused Rage: During his turn, inflict Deathmark on the target enemy until the end of the turn, then deal Physical damage to them. Otherwise, gain Advantage and 10% turn meter, then deal Physical damage. This attack can’t be evaded, and Deathmark can’t be prevented.

[Special 1] Maelstrom: Deal Physical damage to all enemies, inflict Burning, Shock and Healing Immunity for 3 turns, which can’t be resisted, and inflict Stun on two random enemies for 2 turns. If an enemy was already Blinded, Blind all enemies for 2 turns. Inflict Fear on all Jedi, Sith and Unaligned Force User enemies for 1 turn, which can’t be dispelled, evaded or resisted. Then, if all living enemies are Jedi, Sith or Unaligned Force Users, deal additional true damage to them equal to 40% of Draak’s Offense.

[Special 2] A Darker Path: Gain Unbound Power for 2 turns, which can’t be copied, dispelled or prevented. Then, inflict Blind on target enemy for 3 turns and reduce their speed by 10% until the end of the encounter (stacking, excludes raid bosses and Galactic Legends), and if they were already debuffed before this attack, Draak gains 10% speed until the end of the encounter (stacking). If the target is the weakest or a Jedi, also inflict Fracture on them until the end of Draak’s next turn, which can’t be copied, dispelled or prevented. This ability can’t be resisted, and enemy Arkra cannot evade.

 

Heir to the Shattered Throne (Leader) (Final text, Zeta)

Draak can’t be defeated while other allies are present. If both DG-712 and LS-116 are allies at the start of battle, LS-116’s assist chance on his unique also applies to Light Side allies. 

All allies gain +5% Max Health, Max Protection, and Defense for each enemy present at the start of battle, doubled for Galactic Republic and Arkan Empire enemies. Whenever an ally is Critically hit, they lose 10% Critical Damage for 1 turn and gain 10% Offense and 10% Health Steal for 2 turns, doubled if they are below 50% Health.

The first time each other ally falls below 30% Health, they recover 100% Max Health and Protection, reduce their cooldowns by 1 and Draak is inflicted with Fracture until all other allies have taken a turn, which can’t be copied, dispelled, evaded or resisted. Whenever Draak loses Fracture, he gains a stack of Dark Ascension until the end of the encounter, which can’t be copied or dispelled.

If Draak has 3 non-Galactic Legend Arkan Empire allies and one Clone Trooper ally, he gains the granted special ability Break The Chains.

Dark Ascension: Damage received decreased by 15% and damage dealt increased by 30%

 

Betrayed (Unique) (Final text, Zeta)

Dark Side enemies have -40% Potency and Critical Damage. Light Side enemies have -40 Speed and -40% Tenacity. Enemy Galactic Republic Jedi can’t gain bonus turn meter or Protection Up.

Draak has +10% counter Chance for each Jedi and Arkan Empire enemy at the start of battle, and gains additional bonuses depending on the target’s affiliation:

Jedi - Whenever a Jedi enemy gains Foresight, they dispel it and are inflicted with Evasion down for 2 turns, which can’t be evaded

Sith - Draak’s basic ability inflicts Ability Block, and his attacks ignore Defense

Unaligned Force User - Draak ignores Protection while they are debuffed

When Draak uses any ability while targeting a Galactic Republic Jedi, he immediately uses Focused Prowess, dealing 15% more damage for each Jedi enemy. Draak doubles all his stats whenever an enemy Arkra activates his Ultimate ability.

 

Recommended Mods: Offense + Defense

Keep up Draak's damage with Offense while boosting his vitality with Defense

Triangle (Holo-Array) Primary: Offense

Cross (Multiplexer) Primary: Offense

Circle (Data-Bus) Primary: Protection

Arrow (Receiver) Primary: Speed

Secondaries: Speed, Offense %, Offense flat, Protection

9 Replies

  • SimVelocity's avatar
    SimVelocity
    Seasoned Veteran
    23 days ago

    When did Obi-Wan ever have a padawan named Draak Davaron? He only ever had Anakin and Luke, and very briefly in Legends Halagad Ventor and Ferus Olin.

     

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    SimVelocity
    Seasoned Veteran
    23 days ago

    Fan fiction in a section of the forums intended to talk about the game?

    Might be better suited for here
    https://swfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Star_Wars_Fanon_Wiki

  • I believe you severely mistyped your sentence. I think what you meant to write is more along the lines of "A fan kit in the style of the game this forum is here for?" In which case yes, yes this is that.

  • SimVelocity's avatar
    SimVelocity
    Seasoned Veteran
    23 days ago

    No champ, that's not what I was intending to write.

    You seem so averse to posting your fan fiction on the more appropriate platforms, why is that?
    https://swfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Star_Wars_Fanon_Wiki

  • It's like I'm talking to a brick wall. Funnily enough, because it's in the style of the game. If I were just posting stories then yeah, that'd be wrong. As it is, I've been on here a month doing this and CG have taken no action. If I were actually intending for these to be in-game kits, that would also be wrong. As a fan kit creator yourself, I would think you'd understand what expressing creativity is, but I'm clearly mistaken.

  • SimVelocity's avatar
    SimVelocity
    Seasoned Veteran
    23 days ago

    And it's like I'm talking to a 16 year old. Then by your logic, I can post about anything unrelated to Star Wars as long as it's in the style of the game.

    I get your enthusiasm, however again this isn't the appropriate place to flood with fan fiction. If you wish to be productive, then please instead post ideas for actual existing Star Wars characters that could be added to the game or what aspects of Galaxy of Heroes could be changed or improved upon.

    In the meantime, HERE'S the place to go to for your fan fiction: https://swfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Star_Wars_Fanon_Wiki

  • By the definition of fan fiction, it isn't unrelated to Star Wars - it's set within the universe and in the style of the kits the game releases. I'm not "flooding" the forum. And this was my last kit. If you want to suggest ideas, I'm more than happy to receive them and take a shot at it, but the way my brain works means "I started doing this, so I'll finish." Now I've finished, and need new ideas.

  • SimVelocity's avatar
    SimVelocity
    Seasoned Veteran
    23 days ago

    By the definition of fan fiction, it is something original that doesn't exist officially which a fan has made up without the consent of the IP owners.

    If you want ideas, you have all of Wookieepedia to search. Over 200k articles and thousands of them covering different characters and ships. Why not look through the site and see what characters and ships you would want to see added to the game?
    https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Main_Page

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