Rework Reveal: Jedi Knight Anakin

Unique: Righteous Fury
FINAL TEXT: (ZETA) Whenever another ally falls below 50% Health or is defeated, Anakin takes a bonus turn and his next attack deals 100% more damage if all allies were Galactic Republic at the start of battle. If Padmé Amidala is an ally, she takes a bonus turn after each of Anakin's bonus turns.

The problem they have with this zeta text is that they want to connect the 100% more damage clause with both the ally falls below 50% health or is defeated clause and the if all allies were Galactic Republic clause, but the way it is done here makes it ambiguous. The clauses for the bonus turn and the next attack are linked by and which reads as if they both must happen as a result of the initial trigger, but then the last clause tries to undo that.

The other problem is that the 100% more damage is said to happen on the "next attack" which means that it's not necessarily connected to the bonus turn. If he gets stunned during the bonus turn then he will still get 100% damage on the next attack. You can't connect the bonus turn to the damage directly. They both happen as a result of the initial trigger, but they are independent of each other.

This is easy to write out using pseudocode, but more difficult to relate in text.

if (ally health < 50% or ally is defeated)
{
  Anakin takes a bonus turn
  if (all allies are galactic republic)
  {
    Anakin's next attack deals 100% more damage
  }
}

I'd say rewrite and add a semicolon to make a more clear separation between the second and third clause.

Unique: Righteous Fury
(ZETA) Whenever another ally falls below 50% Health or is defeated, Anakin takes a bonus turn; and if all allies were Galactic Republic at the start of battle his next attack deals 100% more damage. If Padmé Amidala is an ally, she takes a bonus turn after each of Anakin's bonus turns.