☆Color My World☆ Rainbowcy (Update 5/7)

What a start :o
I really enjoyed that chapter ^^

Poor Ethereal, being part of an experiment :'(
At least it look like Eden is going to help her :D

I've bookmarked ^^

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've actually had this written for a long time, so it was nice to finally be able to put it out there for others to read ^^ What amuses me is that even though I've read it dozens of times to check for errors I'm still finding stuff I want to change :lol:

The worst thing about it is that Ethereal doesn't mind being a part of the project/experiment. She really is comfortable with everything as it is. Well, at least until Eden does indeed try to help her and more of the truth of what is really going down is revealed.

Thanks :smiley:

You're welcome ^^
Ah, look like you're a perfectionnist ^^
It's pretty understandable ^^

I agree, it's not normal that she doesn't mind being part of that project :\
I'm curious to see what that project is ^^

Yeah, I can't wait to see how she'll react to the outside world, I think it might to be funny to see, since she's a child and she only know that "lab" :D
I hope her life will be better ^^

Ethereal and Eden are now available both on the Exchange and as .sim files on MediaFire :)

@linesa- I'm sorta a perfectionist, I suppose. It's just easier to make sure I do a better job the first time around so the editing is a lot less of a hassle when I go back. I've accepted there's always going to be a mistake/something I want to change though. It happens is pretty much every published book. It's gonna happen in my stories.

It's because she simply doesn't know any better. Ethereal only knows that room. She's only ever been told that she's special. She believes that what the scientists are doing is for her benefit, and the thought of resisting against them isn't even an idea because there has never been the possibility of her leaving her isolated world.
I'll be posting updates once a week on Mondays. so the first chapter next week will go into depth about the project and Ethereal's fate. It's a doozy.

I've written several chapters ahead, and Ethereal has an interesting time interacting with the outside world. It's fun to explore what she does and doesn't know, and how that makes it difficult for her to react to the others around her.