The Red Winged Angels

@Sprottenham Glad to see that you're back with an update! :)


Uh Oh! That warning ''This chapter deals with difficult and unpleasant subject matter.'' yikes, shall I proceed or not...Dun dun dun! I grab a coffee, (it might make the blood in my veins turn to steel, if I make it strong enough!) and continue...

I really like the title "The unnamed feeling" and the very hopeful beginning about the improvement in Natalie!

Also the first picture is so adorable or Aaron in the treehouse.

That must be Very strange for poor Natalie that Eliza's number is no longer in her contacts. How upsetting for her.

I really liked the way you incorporated the pictures, which enlivened Natalie's story that she was telling to Sara.

She must have felt like the cabin was her Haven.

Oh well done with Natalie's memory of her Mom shown in black& white!

Poor thing was a victim of abuse. that is so sad. Fortunately she is in therapy. No wonder she had Eliza.

oh lawdy a wet ball of cardboard! That is the first I ever heard this! It is very descriptive!

''It was now that therapy and healing could finally begin.'' Excellent! I always love a hopeful end of a chapter!

Good Job on the chapter! I'm so happy for me that it wasn't as hard to read as the warning! Perhaps it was Because you put in the warning? Or was it my strong coffee? and I always love that Hope is at the end!

Bravo! I'm so happy you're back!