@Charlottesmom i can imagine that publish would be different to writing, we get so engrossed in our work, it's always good an outside to read for a different perspective. I hope he does help you.
Ahh now the introduction of the secondary main character - Jag. I have to say he's been a pain in the backside to play he give me complete attitude all the time. I get certain facial expression from him i never knew sims could do, i must admit tho i'm in love with my little vampire, so far 2 supernaturals I've played and i'm loving what they can do in game play. I get my daily giggle from the boys. ;)