"ADWilson;c-16303188" wrote:
** waves** Hello, @Kgaff :)
Your version of the McPhail couple was nicely done! LOVED how you worked in the thought bubbles and replacing the flooring ... really gave a feel for the characters and how tight money is for them. I shall enjoy reading your take on things and try my best not to regret what I've done or not done as a result. Ha ha
Thanks Addy, I really have no idea what I'm doing yet, just trying to make it all work. :)
"fleshjenn;c-16303532" wrote:
great start. I'm excited to see how your adventure continues.
Thanks, I'm wondering where is will go as well. :)
"ciane;c-16303739" wrote:
Oh, I love stories, and this one is no exception. The patched floors are awesome and something I'd hate looking at in my own game. I see he has freckles. I didn't notice that before. I love the thought bubbles incorporated into the story too!
I had to do something with the floors! I think I will let their thoughts lead me along in the story.
"SamelaRita;c-16304160" wrote:
I like the patched floors too! And Euan trying to cook round the tree in the kitchen (in my head when I created it, a seed had blown in through the cracked and broken window and just taken root there. And the roof probably leaked enough to keep it watered until its roots were deep enough to reach the water table), and looking so patient and determined. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks to you for building the place and writing a wonderful lead in story. I wanted them to start out plain and simple doing all that back breaking work to make the place habitable again. It took almost two full days of scrubbing to get all that paint off and I keep finding more!
"Hunter_Cottoneye;c-16304893" wrote:
Great story and adventure with this family, I understand how hard it could be to be in this situation. A big pleasure reading your first chapter.
Thank you for your kind comment, keep tuned and we'll follow the adventure as it goes.
